tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post399210790266998293..comments2024-02-09T23:36:58.162+05:30Comments on Shadow Dancing with Mind: WHISPERS: Loss, longing; life as it is....Shashidhar Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comBlogger43125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-17734612360693486462010-10-30T15:37:18.763+05:302010-10-30T15:37:18.763+05:30Thanks Steve and Tracy for liking the verse and en...Thanks Steve and Tracy for liking the verse and enjoying your visit. Look forward to it again...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-46967746215404488552010-10-29T21:54:05.763+05:302010-10-29T21:54:05.763+05:30Wonderful work, Shashi. Shedding memories like Aut...Wonderful work, Shashi. Shedding memories like Autumn leaves is a sad line, but so very true too often. I enjoyed my visit today :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-26638613386923136822010-10-29T12:54:27.426+05:302010-10-29T12:54:27.426+05:30Good work, especially love the first two poems.Good work, especially love the first two poems.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-66136367480920816072010-10-29T09:16:57.211+05:302010-10-29T09:16:57.211+05:30Thanks for liking these verses and I am happy that...Thanks for liking these verses and I am happy that you visited and look forward to your visit again..<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-31657039987289071242010-10-29T09:15:48.080+05:302010-10-29T09:15:48.080+05:30Dear Mona
thanks for liking this one. Yes there is...Dear Mona<br />thanks for liking this one. Yes there is one eternal question which has been asked for ages, in various philosophical thoughts and discussions.. what is life all about? <br />thanks for visiting and look forward to your visit again..<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-16651980590241124212010-10-29T02:12:09.845+05:302010-10-29T02:12:09.845+05:30Oh! Dear Shashi, this is amazing! I love "Di...Oh! Dear Shashi, this is amazing! I love "Did I Lose You?" and I really relate to "The Life as It Is". It's such a beautiful, accurate description of this frustration. I struggle with balance and wondering why I'm living in the future and the past more than the present as well.<br /><br />I love the lines:<br />"Where thoughts corrode<br />Innerself"<br /><br />Thank you so much for expressing this so beautifully!awitchtryinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09626760512365562043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-86878948235625720672010-10-28T17:57:33.838+05:302010-10-28T17:57:33.838+05:30Wow! There is so much depth in this one!
Some ete...Wow! There is so much depth in this one!<br /><br />Some eternal queries that will never be answered I guess...<br /><br />I guess this is what they mean when they say, you die everyday.Monahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08615034229525061880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-26418310538548881022010-10-28T17:32:51.518+05:302010-10-28T17:32:51.518+05:30Thanks Dustus for visiting and your comments, look...Thanks Dustus for visiting and your comments, look forward to seeing you again... Thanks for liking my work.<br /><br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-41147186976896370032010-10-28T09:24:21.972+05:302010-10-28T09:24:21.972+05:30Life As It Is has a great questioning build up for...Life As It Is has a great questioning build up for the last lines. Longing of Life Time I felt was artfully stated. Did i Lose You is a clever poem. <br /><br />I enjoy your work and the mutual feedback, Shashi. Cheersdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-40035714327058198952010-10-28T08:58:10.342+05:302010-10-28T08:58:10.342+05:30Dear Victoria
Thanks for your visit and liking my ...Dear Victoria<br />Thanks for your visit and liking my verse. It looks like that you also believe in many lives.. too. Thanks and look forward to see you again...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-15607080402057341762010-10-28T08:56:28.174+05:302010-10-28T08:56:28.174+05:30Thanks Claudia, The lines " Takes a long time...Thanks Claudia, The lines " Takes a long time to fade and dry, on the wet lips or in the memories of life" is one of my favorite too... <br />Thanks for visiting and hope to have you back again...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-89346887561237525352010-10-28T08:54:50.646+05:302010-10-28T08:54:50.646+05:30Dear Shell
Thanks for your words, I appreciate it...Dear Shell<br /><br />Thanks for your words, I appreciate it so much.. hope you will visit again...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-2771369080197899902010-10-28T04:57:45.062+05:302010-10-28T04:57:45.062+05:30This is so profound, my friend. A lot of wisdom as...This is so profound, my friend. A lot of wisdom as we hurl through the many dyings of our lifetime. Beautiful. Thanks for your visit to my blog. VictoriaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-47609176455385961242010-10-28T00:14:03.616+05:302010-10-28T00:14:03.616+05:30i absolutely loved this lines
...Takes a long time...i absolutely loved this lines<br />...Takes a long time to fade and dry<br />On the wet lips or in the memories of life...<br />this is really good!Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-71716887716052532802010-10-28T00:10:23.762+05:302010-10-28T00:10:23.762+05:30Familiar sentiments expressed in a gentle way. Ver...Familiar sentiments expressed in a gentle way. Very much enjoy your words...<br />~Shell <br />@shellartistreeShellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15057420883043757798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-34575235417898695262010-10-27T22:00:13.423+05:302010-10-27T22:00:13.423+05:30Dears
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@Pattiken...Dears <br />@L L Barkat<br />@Sender D<br />@Cianphelan<br />@Pattiken<br />@Hope<br /><br />Thanks for enjoying my verses and hope to see you all back again soon.<br /><br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-81568506955260906752010-10-27T21:57:19.712+05:302010-10-27T21:57:19.712+05:30Thanks River for enjoying the last one ... yes its...Thanks River for enjoying the last one ... yes its life as it is.. I am touched by your words...<br /><br />Nice picturisque verse.. and the nostalgic element to it.. I liked it..<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-59961243457649628242010-10-27T21:56:07.318+05:302010-10-27T21:56:07.318+05:30Thanks Tuberider for liking my verse...
Nice pic...Thanks Tuberider for liking my verse... <br /><br />Nice picturisque verse.. and the nostalgic element to it.. I liked it..<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-2856858565396520342010-10-27T21:54:14.001+05:302010-10-27T21:54:14.001+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Shashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-14131253180450293392010-10-27T21:50:17.412+05:302010-10-27T21:50:17.412+05:30Thank you for visiting my site today and leaving s...Thank you for visiting my site today and leaving such kind words on my poem The Mirror<br /><br />'Did I loose you in between my thoughts?' love that line. Really makes you think. I can relate to that.<br /><br />Your last poem really struck me hard. I loved it! Especially the last verse where it wraps it up entirely. 'whenever i ask the angels to live, they let me die another death' Amazing!<br /><br />Absolutely lovely<br />Looking forward to reading more of your works<br />thank you<br />HopeHopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-16102361165623928612010-10-27T21:27:41.754+05:302010-10-27T21:27:41.754+05:30Lovely. really grabbed me with its truth. Nice On...Lovely. really grabbed me with its truth. Nice One Shot, Shashi.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-31301677812462861312010-10-27T21:12:07.629+05:302010-10-27T21:12:07.629+05:30Love the paradox, and that is life--to live, one m...Love the paradox, and that is life--to live, one must die. Powerful words, leading to the potential of wisdom and insightful debate. Fine work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-69911245400299022562010-10-27T21:09:55.499+05:302010-10-27T21:09:55.499+05:30thanks Suzicate for liking this one...
ॐ नमः शिव...thanks Suzicate for liking this one... <br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-57799229389433659932010-10-27T21:07:55.528+05:302010-10-27T21:07:55.528+05:30thanks Suzicate for liking this one...
ॐ नमः शिव...thanks Suzicate for liking this one... <br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-50924767400666365962010-10-27T21:00:34.895+05:302010-10-27T21:00:34.895+05:30Thanks Anthony...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah ShivayaThanks Anthony...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.com