tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post4053886516509102515..comments2024-02-09T23:36:58.162+05:30Comments on Shadow Dancing with Mind: WHISPERS: Rain, Rain... Rain againShashidhar Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-60640849983001159782011-11-06T00:52:15.939+05:302011-11-06T00:52:15.939+05:30stunning poetry.stunning poetry.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-64122314810650414612011-11-06T00:28:24.989+05:302011-11-06T00:28:24.989+05:30nice....second stanza great...love the drops of lo...nice....second stanza great...love the drops of love ont he spine as well...very nice shashiBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-34051778764562910072011-11-05T05:52:04.364+05:302011-11-05T05:52:04.364+05:30the way you write haiku is amazing! all grand piec...the way you write haiku is amazing! all grand piecesAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-6157893398179751222011-11-05T05:35:41.046+05:302011-11-05T05:35:41.046+05:30Like that falling in love and plunging into the oc...Like that falling in love and plunging into the ocean ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-66678966699311023612011-11-05T02:02:55.130+05:302011-11-05T02:02:55.130+05:30Shashi - Each of these are so well thought. You ha...Shashi - Each of these are so well thought. You have plumbed your emotional self to find the truth and then whittled each poem by using the perfect word to convey the message.<br /><br />These two stand out:<br /><br />Every peak<br />Has its valley of pain<br />Fall in love<br /><br />My contemporaries are often afraid to try love "again" because of pain.<br />And:<br /><br />In the eternity of love<br />Time is<br />my sole contemporary<br /><br />I love personifying time. It is the river we ride on while we're here.<br /><br />Wonderful!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-53742596917571849882011-11-04T23:09:52.394+05:302011-11-04T23:09:52.394+05:30beautifully woven...my fav today is the climbing t...beautifully woven...my fav today is the climbing the peaks and then letting go..time to fall..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-50801437004022853652011-08-16T05:45:09.568+05:302011-08-16T05:45:09.568+05:30love the thoughts of rain falling, well done.love the thoughts of rain falling, well done.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-52062900066757951392011-08-15T13:07:02.542+05:302011-08-15T13:07:02.542+05:30Beautiful sensual poem, one to read to a lover...Beautiful sensual poem, one to read to a lover...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-25345002835976451112011-08-15T07:41:04.939+05:302011-08-15T07:41:04.939+05:30Nice one. Very tense and erotic at the same time.
...Nice one. Very tense and erotic at the same time.<br /><br />Here's my offering for Potluck 48: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/the-lake/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-58629336210496656122011-08-15T07:36:27.598+05:302011-08-15T07:36:27.598+05:30first poem, second stanza, love love that and it i...first poem, second stanza, love love that and it is so true. The more we suffer the better we appreciate the moments of happiness :)<br /><br />Happy potluck!!!<br /><br />http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/smokescreen/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-47356978564853496232011-08-15T07:35:47.321+05:302011-08-15T07:35:47.321+05:30Loved the second Haiku. The poem showed the eroti...Loved the second Haiku. The poem showed the erotic and mental state of love for me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com