tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post4727539023978082387..comments2024-02-09T23:36:58.162+05:30Comments on Shadow Dancing with Mind: THE READER: Haiku – The essence of a poetic momentShashidhar Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-9979757036823085072012-11-18T11:34:52.421+05:302012-11-18T11:34:52.421+05:30I just read this and found it to be very informati...I just read this and found it to be very informative. Thanks so much for sharing your knowledge with us ! peace!Lola lolapowerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16234171261231566274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-38147829177035554322012-02-10T20:03:17.846+05:302012-02-10T20:03:17.846+05:30Its a long way to go for me as well. I just starte...Its a long way to go for me as well. I just started. I liked the Basho's Haiku. I had read it :)!<br />And, your definition is good and certainly deserves a new name :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-22105474929011253952012-02-10T13:38:24.723+05:302012-02-10T13:38:24.723+05:30I read somewhere that Haiku is the smallest litera...I read somewhere that Haiku is the smallest literary form and has the most number of rules.<br />Thanks for the post.<br />http://travellenz.wordpress.com/Malini Rajeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05844399018047147584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-75793393776583560732011-12-13T09:12:29.232+05:302011-12-13T09:12:29.232+05:30beautiful haiku !
last line is the best part ...I...beautiful haiku ! <br />last line is the best part ...I loved it :)<br /><br />Thank you for shaing! :)Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07761042345406673308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-84206455624819762932011-07-26T16:12:03.373+05:302011-07-26T16:12:03.373+05:30This is such a wonderful share. I am just learnin...This is such a wonderful share. I am just learning the beauty of haiku and will post my humble offerings.<br /><br />Thank you and please invite us again.Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-39194342813014446652011-06-19T20:34:21.383+05:302011-06-19T20:34:21.383+05:30Thanks for this post!!..Yes I think the best way I...Thanks for this post!!..Yes I think the best way I see it, after reading your very fine points is ~ to use spontaneity (when it's present)..Use the least words to describe a whole story..colour, contrast, unexpected words may give it flavour...Still difficult to be really good...I try..:-)<br />Love & Light<br />NoraNora Boekelmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16106520306327513388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-14889045510832020772011-02-28T14:21:05.705+05:302011-02-28T14:21:05.705+05:30I almost put up your wonderful words of haiku on t...I almost put up your wonderful words of haiku on the review and now I know why I didnt for it is beautifully placed here. I will link over so people can enjoy my friend.<br /><br />Thank you for your kindness and your poisemoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-11982891294385589152011-02-14T22:25:37.986+05:302011-02-14T22:25:37.986+05:30What a wonderful presentation you have made on tan...What a wonderful presentation you have made on tanka, haiku and rengu here, Shashi!<br /><br />I learned a lot and thoroughly enjoyed this.<br /><br />Perhaps later we can collectively take up a round of renga?<br /><br />That would be so much fun!<br /><br />My very best,<br /><br />Lady NyoAsobimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15661326504398833746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-44018506845561536942011-02-13T17:51:49.091+05:302011-02-13T17:51:49.091+05:30thank you Shashi. loved the examples you chose and...thank you Shashi. loved the examples you chose and the photo's but yours makes me ponder the path more.<br /><br />Under my feet<br />Road disappeared<br />Am I the destination? <br /><br />I think I will try more Haiku<br />you are an inspiration!<br /><br />thank you<br /><br />and thank you for your visit and commentHopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-6726543718515721662011-02-13T12:35:17.180+05:302011-02-13T12:35:17.180+05:30Loved reading it. quite an insight in Haiku. I am ...Loved reading it. quite an insight in Haiku. I am not very much at ease in writing haiku. your post will make me try more. thank you.Celestial Dreamzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-35342612654409538632011-02-12T23:43:59.094+05:302011-02-12T23:43:59.094+05:30What a great post! So many lovely haikus. I enjo...What a great post! So many lovely haikus. I enjoy them so much, but have trouble using such few words. Every once in a while though, I do ponder writing one.Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-27962503731253807372011-02-12T22:13:49.980+05:302011-02-12T22:13:49.980+05:30You describe yourself as "not an expert"...You describe yourself as "not an expert", but your knowledge of the form and the haiku you create bely your words. It is a beautiful form and I like to dabble in it myself, but it is challenging to create a picture, a moment, some fleeting thought in so few words. Thank you so much for the deeper insight today Shashi.Katherine Krigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00737873330498032718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-78369521023515853822011-02-12T09:58:24.929+05:302011-02-12T09:58:24.929+05:30I love the haiku form, although I only recently be...I love the haiku form, although I only recently began writing haikus when participating in "haiku my heart" on Fridays over at the blog Recuerda mi Corazon. You might like to participate there yourself! Thanks for your very informative post. <br /><br />And thanks so much for your kind comment on my blog!Lesliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01221703763145912238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-83530271806965046002011-02-12T05:53:27.128+05:302011-02-12T05:53:27.128+05:30..everything that comes from the heart in a flash .....everything that comes from the heart in a flash of insight is Haiku. I LOVE that description.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-91354772298391370662011-02-11T23:28:02.774+05:302011-02-11T23:28:02.774+05:30illuminating post- thank you as I am trying to wri...illuminating post- thank you as I am trying to write haikus- not as easy as it looks!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-65340447108793658402011-02-11T01:17:56.661+05:302011-02-11T01:17:56.661+05:30Great share, thanks for helping demystify the Haik...Great share, thanks for helping demystify the Haiku. Hughes, Suicide's Note has long been a favorite of mine for the honest simplicity of it.Luna Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00577750498136765025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-74488703052906525662011-02-10T18:02:51.507+05:302011-02-10T18:02:51.507+05:30I found this so interesting and I loved your Haiku...I found this so interesting and I loved your Haiku - <br /><br />Under my feet<br />Road disappeared<br />Am I the destination? <br />- Shashi<br /><br />Wonderful!Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-61311824962270253242011-02-09T19:49:33.788+05:302011-02-09T19:49:33.788+05:30I love to read Haiku but have always been hesitant...I love to read Haiku but have always been hesitant to try it. You have inspired me! Enjoyed yours posted here, and thank you for visiting me as well :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-21361790333804526672011-02-07T23:19:22.446+05:302011-02-07T23:19:22.446+05:30Yes They have...Haiku do talk and carry people wit...Yes They have...Haiku do talk and carry people within... Here is Basho himself in one of his Haiku<br />Laid waste on this journey<br />My dreams wander scattered<br />Through desolate fields<br />-BashoShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-63055330780283785942011-02-07T21:57:04.515+05:302011-02-07T21:57:04.515+05:30Oh this was wonderful
I too love the mystery of ha...Oh this was wonderful<br />I too love the mystery of haiku<br />that second of image captured in brief words<br />that relationship that suddenly exists between things<br />your last Haiku gave a thrill to my mind<br />But tell me....do you know...does haiku have people in it? I have posted a few myself lately<br />love the form...<br />you are a wonderful poetSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.com