tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post5321509285931921493..comments2024-02-09T23:36:58.162+05:30Comments on Shadow Dancing with Mind: WHISPERS - The Seed is PlantedShashidhar Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-42768996605736447752011-08-03T18:54:30.109+05:302011-08-03T18:54:30.109+05:30That first haiku is REALLY powerful. Great write....That first haiku is REALLY powerful. Great write. I have some words resonating in my heart like shattered glass now. :(Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-52921509895229911622011-08-03T03:08:55.377+05:302011-08-03T03:08:55.377+05:30Your words are light as a feather and gentle as a ...Your words are light as a feather and gentle as a breeze-- nicely done, all of them.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-8958493382640741502011-08-02T22:09:30.000+05:302011-08-02T22:09:30.000+05:30awesome piece!!!! this was beautifully written tha...awesome piece!!!! this was beautifully written thanks for sharing and for stopping by!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-55544888801809900942011-08-02T21:02:47.265+05:302011-08-02T21:02:47.265+05:30What a beautiful sentiment in your poem, Shashi. ...What a beautiful sentiment in your poem, Shashi. I like that idea of a sea of togetherness.<br /><br />Your haiku carry a feeling of wistful sadness.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-45744932035346547772011-08-02T16:34:51.636+05:302011-08-02T16:34:51.636+05:30Lovely and true, I especially appreciate the call ...Lovely and true, I especially appreciate the call to responsibility, the need to carry the drop of happiness to the sea of togetherness, so right! If I fall down on this job, it is no surprise if my happiness dries up! Have a great day!Sober on the Way to Sanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11521832804187424523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-49000120513328409902011-08-02T16:20:20.480+05:302011-08-02T16:20:20.480+05:30The last stanza captured the essence of the poem. ...The last stanza captured the essence of the poem. Nice write.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-38370089097561771852011-08-02T15:46:51.382+05:302011-08-02T15:46:51.382+05:30Beautiful writing, Shashi!Beautiful writing, Shashi!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-72707598691600259012011-08-02T15:29:49.797+05:302011-08-02T15:29:49.797+05:30"Do you still think of me
Some times; when oc..."Do you still think of me<br />Some times; when ocean scent<br />Caresses your lips"...I love the imagery of this.<br /><br />"drop it in the sea of togetherness"...these words are so powerful.<br /><br />Wonderful writing, Shashi.<br /><br />Thanks so much for sharing.The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-24569932760959126962011-08-02T08:42:59.095+05:302011-08-02T08:42:59.095+05:30Dew drops, settle softly on the lips
Of evening s...Dew drops, settle softly on the lips<br />Of evening star<br />Love, flowers<br /><br />I live on Evening Star Lane which I've always thought of as a poetic address. You've made it so with your lovely haiku. Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-53331014626174574062011-08-02T04:40:28.304+05:302011-08-02T04:40:28.304+05:30You did well with the picture and it's lines a...You did well with the picture and it's lines are lovely.Jess PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10775984664764629241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-1409334457857354612011-08-02T03:01:30.475+05:302011-08-02T03:01:30.475+05:30Every line is a treat to behold, if only I could h...Every line is a treat to behold, if only I could hold fast upon the high standards of write that you constantly displayAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-23737873220383106512011-08-01T23:24:23.615+05:302011-08-01T23:24:23.615+05:30Beautiful Haiku and prose.
Yes, once love exists, ...Beautiful Haiku and prose.<br />Yes, once love exists, it cannot ever, 'not be' again. <br />Love is a cycle and a circle, unbroken. Lovely.Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-89065320942321986022011-08-01T22:32:19.939+05:302011-08-01T22:32:19.939+05:30superb imagery, very poetic and beautiful...superb imagery, very poetic and beautiful...Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-19225314347992738382011-08-01T17:20:48.095+05:302011-08-01T17:20:48.095+05:30Endings are so hard, it is so easy to wonder if th...Endings are so hard, it is so easy to wonder if they still wonder about you... i know i do... :] xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-45546340507498354112011-08-01T16:49:12.405+05:302011-08-01T16:49:12.405+05:30Extremely inspirational write. Thank you for shari...Extremely inspirational write. Thank you for sharing!Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14368539518339009833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-9371999042973936782011-08-01T15:31:48.171+05:302011-08-01T15:31:48.171+05:30Your haiku writing talent is amazing! They are all...Your haiku writing talent is amazing! They are all so powerful. Great work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-26989238115496105882011-08-01T15:11:59.202+05:302011-08-01T15:11:59.202+05:30beautiful all of them. this was my favorite.
&qu...beautiful all of them. this was my favorite. <br /><br />"Do you still think of me<br />Some times; when ocean scent<br />Caresses your lips"<br /><br />sums up exactly what i'm wondering right now. thanks for sharing these.Dishilicioushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00954015760830917157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-39530199434599538802011-08-01T12:40:09.786+05:302011-08-01T12:40:09.786+05:30hi Shashi, you write amazing poems, words that are...hi Shashi, you write amazing poems, words that are meant for eternity. Lovely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-46372963110211538352011-08-01T11:40:02.985+05:302011-08-01T11:40:02.985+05:30i love your poetry, Shashi! all relationships requ...i love your poetry, Shashi! all relationships require attention but what enjoyment is there in life if you have no one to share it with? well worth putting in the effort in order to <br /><br />"...save a drop of happiness<br />From drying up..."<br /><br />lovely! thank you for your wonderful Poetry Potluck prompts. dani♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-836337566986290312011-08-01T09:59:25.820+05:302011-08-01T09:59:25.820+05:30Nicely done!Nicely done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-82783498030830392132011-08-01T09:57:47.738+05:302011-08-01T09:57:47.738+05:30adored the second poem. you are doing such a wonde...adored the second poem. you are doing such a wonderful job, keep it up your great!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-6721987265711371912010-10-24T07:54:41.127+05:302010-10-24T07:54:41.127+05:30Sorry Friends I was away on Durga Puja and festiva...Sorry Friends I was away on Durga Puja and festivals so I missed these out.<br />So here I am replying to your messages again...<br />@Olivia thanks for your nice words... and here is the link... http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2010/05/shadow-dancing-with-mind-monday-morning.html<br /><br />@Mary I also try to live by those words of taking the small drop of happiness and love to the ocean...<br /><br />@Brian Thanks for your appreciation<br /><br />@Joanne thanks for liking those words... I enjoyed them too...<br /><br />@Gabriala Thank you<br /><br />@Eric Yes I agree... happiness multiplies by sharing...<br /><br />@Steve Thanks and I am happy that you consider it simple but not simple minded... ;-)<br /><br />@Patty Thank you and hope to have you again here...<br /><br />It will be great if you can join in to follow as it will connect you all with me ...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-2003323965304226932010-10-16T04:01:00.415+05:302010-10-16T04:01:00.415+05:30This is beautiful and touching...how to save a dro...This is beautiful and touching...how to save a drop of happiness from drying up...love it. Great One Shot xoxpattyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06042196899105312611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-82541726765711995142010-10-15T06:26:18.807+05:302010-10-15T06:26:18.807+05:30Plain-spoken, practical, with a simple (but not si...Plain-spoken, practical, with a simple (but not simple-minded) concept and images. Necessary, smile-inducing work.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-87367390670391796722010-10-14T00:44:35.153+05:302010-10-14T00:44:35.153+05:30Happiness flourishes when it's shared. Nice O...Happiness flourishes when it's shared. Nice One Shot, Shashi!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.com