tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post4499443989928624942..comments2024-02-09T23:36:58.162+05:30Comments on Shadow Dancing with Mind: WHISPERS: Clouds in the AtticShashidhar Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-17403071287786123122010-12-18T05:28:03.182+05:302010-12-18T05:28:03.182+05:30A lovely and true take on a child's mindseye.
...A lovely and true take on a child's mindseye.<br /><br />I like the intertwining of the imagery.<br /><br />Lady NyoAsobimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15661326504398833746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-40574789745587305112010-12-18T03:45:35.664+05:302010-12-18T03:45:35.664+05:30To remember innocence is a joy.To remember innocence is a joy.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-86077408861284521332010-12-18T02:58:17.275+05:302010-12-18T02:58:17.275+05:30I read the haiku batch - indelible image work here...I read the haiku batch - indelible image work here, my friend.<br /><br />Didn't read the second poem because each poet gets one poem (haiku/tanka are excepted) read by me per week. . . my schedule is crazed. (To read anymore deprives another poet of a read - maybe commented on - poem.)Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-10880304125987855562010-12-16T23:35:02.518+05:302010-12-16T23:35:02.518+05:30Beautiful images, Shashi
My One Shot: http://liv2...Beautiful images, Shashi<br /><br />My One Shot: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/on-reading-a-poem-for-poetry-potluck-and-monday-morning-writing-prompt/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-34045793034218526132010-12-16T10:30:20.357+05:302010-12-16T10:30:20.357+05:30Shashi,
I always find peace when I visit your site...Shashi,<br />I always find peace when I visit your site.<br />Thank You!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-55966050549025753122010-12-16T02:14:06.194+05:302010-12-16T02:14:06.194+05:30Shashi, "Clouds in the attic" is a wonde...Shashi, "Clouds in the attic" is a wonderful poem. You capture the interaction and expression of a child very well. Great innocence shown through the child wanting to warm the clouds. Great poetry. I also enjoyed the stanzas in "Some Free Form of Haiku's on Rain" rain very much. Cheers.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-7465226153591128742010-12-16T01:18:00.199+05:302010-12-16T01:18:00.199+05:30Nice One Shot, Shashi.
("pregnant clouds"...Nice One Shot, Shashi.<br />("pregnant clouds" is a great description!)Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-13023700437742436952010-12-15T22:17:14.470+05:302010-12-15T22:17:14.470+05:30You captured a child's inherent sense of play ...You captured a child's inherent sense of play so beautifully. This is wonderful!Belinda Munozhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03510652167058360972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-18457219505940130252010-12-15T22:00:17.867+05:302010-12-15T22:00:17.867+05:30The middle haiku is exceptionally vivid Shashi, an...The middle haiku is exceptionally vivid Shashi, and your little girl the essence of childhood, with her compassion for the clouds. Also the photograph at the top--almost too green to be real--matches your subject perfectly. Always a pleasure to come by here.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-23626968446699375782010-12-15T19:09:42.001+05:302010-12-15T19:09:42.001+05:30like your haikus on rain in particular. Well-penne...like your haikus on rain in particular. Well-penned my friend. Always an interesting journey visiting Shashi's blog!<br /><br />Peace<br /><br />Luke @ WordSalad (for OSW)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-49603076543569792032010-12-15T13:31:35.809+05:302010-12-15T13:31:35.809+05:30hi shashi-- lovely as ever-- you have such a gener...hi shashi-- lovely as ever-- you have such a generous heart and your openness to the world is a huge inspiration. xjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-38944887446680076502010-12-13T12:24:55.073+05:302010-12-13T12:24:55.073+05:30Love the way the hiaku sequence and the prose refl...Love the way the hiaku sequence and the prose reflect off each other<br /><br />really nice form<br /><br />Thanks my dear friend for sharing your talent with One Shot - we are honoredmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-31021724773202203952010-12-10T09:24:49.171+05:302010-12-10T09:24:49.171+05:30Just Beautiful!Your words always have a certain wa...Just Beautiful!Your words always have a certain warmth in it.Feel the beauty of nature as I read on.<br /><br />Both are very godd works.Particularly love the second one.So lovely!June_Butterflyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17400867257051822555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-29129151094781597562010-12-10T08:14:09.889+05:302010-12-10T08:14:09.889+05:30Beautiful images, creative inquisitive thoughts......Beautiful images, creative inquisitive thoughts... wonderfulReflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-12111382054742609602010-12-10T02:42:38.371+05:302010-12-10T02:42:38.371+05:30hi shashi...just come across this whilst doing the...hi shashi...just come across this whilst doing the one stop rounds...this is beautiful..cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-25841306696083784052010-12-10T01:21:11.646+05:302010-12-10T01:21:11.646+05:30Oh you are a master at this kind of writing, blend...Oh you are a master at this kind of writing, blending nature, human nature, spiritual. I loved the haiku, especially the forest dancing to rain drums, thunder applauding. And then, Clouds in the attic - what an awesome title and beautiful poem. Sweet child to want to put up clouds under a blanket in the attic so they won't be too cold.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-67147231520313714172010-12-10T01:06:11.729+05:302010-12-10T01:06:11.729+05:30A child's innocence is something we can never ...A child's innocence is something we can never match! I really wonder why.. <br />What a refreshing read, Shashi... <br />But reading the word 'wake' in the end gave me quite a jolt... cuz I had so happily pictured a little girl dancing about, running gleefully... I so wish that darkness didn't befall upon here..<br /><br />What a beautiful one shot, my friend... kudos!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-57442320189475427522010-12-10T00:20:08.553+05:302010-12-10T00:20:08.553+05:30These are wonderful indeed. Love and Light, Sender...These are wonderful indeed. Love and Light, SenderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-64500537949655990222010-12-09T22:43:16.721+05:302010-12-09T22:43:16.721+05:30Oh Sashi, these haikus, and poem are so beautiful....Oh Sashi, these haikus, and poem are so beautiful. Really, I get lost within them. Thank you.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-59972120193770587392010-12-09T21:09:12.054+05:302010-12-09T21:09:12.054+05:30http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010...http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/12/08/thursday-poets-rally-week-34-participation-awards/<br /><br />poets rally week 34 awards...<br />help visit a few participants if you can.<br />Happy Thursday!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-10658810270730583702010-12-09T21:08:15.815+05:302010-12-09T21:08:15.815+05:30your poetry is always nature oriented and super cu...your poetry is always nature oriented and super cute.<br />keep it up.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-74777011922748020162010-12-09T20:45:13.333+05:302010-12-09T20:45:13.333+05:30beautiful! what a magical post, glad I stopped by....beautiful! what a magical post, glad I stopped by.Everyday Goddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00486528297252417282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-18570540359748434602010-12-09T19:00:25.824+05:302010-12-09T19:00:25.824+05:30nature's beauty personified..nature's beauty personified..Deepika Vasudevahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12551767751979830062noreply@blogger.com