tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post6743884858362346608..comments2024-02-09T23:36:58.162+05:30Comments on Shadow Dancing with Mind: WHISPERS : SighsShashidhar Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-13419484214745528572011-12-09T16:31:31.272+05:302011-12-09T16:31:31.272+05:30Hello Sir, I like this blog very much and wish tha...Hello Sir, I like this blog very much and wish that you will also like this- http://njpoems.wordpress.com<br /><br />ok thanks and JAI JINENDRA...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-88990888330649464362011-12-02T06:47:00.534+05:302011-12-02T06:47:00.534+05:30I love your deeper meaning into suffering. I wrote...I love your deeper meaning into suffering. I wrote a poem about a form of suffering and strangely thought of you<br /><br />your beauty in words deepens with time my friendAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-5245594942684805492011-11-30T21:36:07.138+05:302011-11-30T21:36:07.138+05:30nice... really it is...nice... really it is...Tathagata Ghoshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11228529131016591232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-35510460670307944722011-11-28T13:08:55.969+05:302011-11-28T13:08:55.969+05:30Both lovely and disturbing!
Madeleine Begun KaneBoth lovely and disturbing!<br /><a href="http://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/" rel="nofollow">Madeleine Begun Kane</a>Madeleine Begun Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12290268300271622956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-35300203342745882482011-11-26T20:59:22.782+05:302011-11-26T20:59:22.782+05:30aesthetically very pleasing, once again, my friend...aesthetically very pleasing, once again, my friendAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-26857362465071107302011-11-25T19:49:10.349+05:302011-11-25T19:49:10.349+05:30Beautiful! I like your haiku's very much.The p...Beautiful! I like your haiku's very much.The poem of pain compares itself with nature ..niceUma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-18207607508595864472011-11-24T20:41:14.915+05:302011-11-24T20:41:14.915+05:30I wish we could know love without the pain part. A...I wish we could know love without the pain part. Accepting that impossibility is difficult for me at times. I enjoy your thought here Thank you.Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-46048815686034955922011-11-24T11:55:49.654+05:302011-11-24T11:55:49.654+05:30I like how you mix time together with space in the...I like how you mix time together with space in the "emptiness of now", and the use of "river" as a verb a little later on. There's a gentle expansiveness to your vision, against which the red/fallen/crash stanza stands strongly.Kathy B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09475101089455608729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-34875224777980292672011-11-24T11:14:37.627+05:302011-11-24T11:14:37.627+05:30This poem is amazing! It left me breathless! LolaThis poem is amazing! It left me breathless! Lolalolapowerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16234171261231566274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-47007065202860013392011-11-24T09:17:48.865+05:302011-11-24T09:17:48.865+05:30So beautiful. You're talent is awesome.So beautiful. You're talent is awesome.Jessi Paynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18214574143645008474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-7930185449091606072011-11-24T07:08:02.974+05:302011-11-24T07:08:02.974+05:30PAIN! I think of a girl kept prisoner in the woods...PAIN! I think of a girl kept prisoner in the woods<br />who had to chop off her arm to free herself. How do we say it? "No pain, no gain?"<br /><br />Every birth first suffers that exquisite pain, even the acorn, when it struggles to 'flower' into lovely praise, that great oak.<br /><br />BOY! You DO get me to think. Enjoy reading your stuff...and it IS completely painless!<br />PEACE!steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-10515368907773713092011-11-24T06:40:49.087+05:302011-11-24T06:40:49.087+05:30Thought-provoking poem and haiku, Sashi. It's ...Thought-provoking poem and haiku, Sashi. It's always a joy to read your work, even if it's about pain.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-42587134306600135462011-11-24T04:59:55.722+05:302011-11-24T04:59:55.722+05:30Shashi, really enjoyed the haikus, and the Sighs w...Shashi, really enjoyed the haikus, and the Sighs was very neat way of conveyance, definitely makes you think thanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-48578612027795640812011-11-24T02:57:58.017+05:302011-11-24T02:57:58.017+05:30It is true, we cannot escape suffering, and to lov...It is true, we cannot escape suffering, and to love fully, means loss at times...it also allows us to grow and in turn love more. Beautiful series.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-70950892438730248602011-11-24T00:53:01.134+05:302011-11-24T00:53:01.134+05:30Sad and excellent haiku.Sad and excellent haiku.Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-78500485454797820362011-11-23T22:11:25.352+05:302011-11-23T22:11:25.352+05:30It's important to remember the cycle of suffer...It's important to remember the cycle of suffering and then renewal, change, progress. Sad, somber, but also understanding lines here.<br />GeneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-65063604505677875772011-11-23T21:51:38.075+05:302011-11-23T21:51:38.075+05:30ugh..sowing seeds of pain..guess sometimes we have...ugh..sowing seeds of pain..guess sometimes we have to...fine write shashi...also enjoyed your haikus.. as always..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-59028051121651143002011-11-23T21:06:57.122+05:302011-11-23T21:06:57.122+05:30A sweet sadness and heartache to both the Haiku an...A sweet sadness and heartache to both the Haiku and longer poem, expressed by someone who seems to know first-hand. Time doesn't always heal completely, but makes the pain less sharp and easier to bear. Well written. <br /> <br /> (Shashi, I usually think of Haiku as traditionally 17 syllables. Your pieces are each a bit different-22,22, and 18. Curious, is this a different style from the traditional and is there a name for this Haiku format?)Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-22472322423448007782011-11-23T20:42:38.067+05:302011-11-23T20:42:38.067+05:30Nice to come upon these poems this morning. Lovely...Nice to come upon these poems this morning. Lovely picture to begin your post.Andrea (Andee) Beltranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02200735123058256864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-21049289953053157022011-11-23T20:19:26.661+05:302011-11-23T20:19:26.661+05:30such sadness in those first haiku, but the 3rd jus...such sadness in those first haiku, but the 3rd just blooms so profoundly... and "Sighs" has such beautiful, melancholy truths to it.joannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17400736499756854621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-38470483272638810232011-11-23T19:46:34.939+05:302011-11-23T19:46:34.939+05:30thank you for sharing your words Shashi - the less...thank you for sharing your words Shashi - the lessons of pain are unavoidable in life - what we choose to do with them - our choice. <br /><br />You have chosen to make beautiful imagery!lacouveehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07701270360367000425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-79968552662276104102011-11-23T19:24:00.304+05:302011-11-23T19:24:00.304+05:30a treat.... albeit pain, a treat the lines :-)a treat.... albeit pain, a treat the lines :-)Thought-Leshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10237793982612415015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-56786445670520497062011-11-23T18:49:07.077+05:302011-11-23T18:49:07.077+05:30The pain of suffering here is emotional and mental...The pain of suffering here is emotional and mental anguish... and this takes years and work to cope and accept it.<br /><br />The seeds of pain - great imagery here.Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-92216127660102304652011-11-23T18:43:18.170+05:302011-11-23T18:43:18.170+05:30Wow lots of great lines, so true that many hold on...Wow lots of great lines, so true that many hold on to it and never releasing pain either.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-83215256892652763292011-11-23T18:28:00.123+05:302011-11-23T18:28:00.123+05:30Captivating Shashi...Captivating Shashi...JANUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06983287092498427967noreply@blogger.com