tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post8329122485339584703..comments2024-02-09T23:36:58.162+05:30Comments on Shadow Dancing with Mind: WHISPERS: Flowers and Traffic Lights...Shashidhar Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-82026338389335724022011-01-27T09:44:32.770+05:302011-01-27T09:44:32.770+05:30i LOVE your poetry!
♥ danii LOVE your poetry!<br />♥ daniAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-82515106478190197592011-01-27T09:13:44.581+05:302011-01-27T09:13:44.581+05:30Wonderful pieces, Shashi. I especially like this:
...Wonderful pieces, Shashi. I especially like this:<br /><br />In her silence<br />My lips find a whisper<br />Burning on her lipsPattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-46960188769896313092011-01-27T08:10:39.369+05:302011-01-27T08:10:39.369+05:30The traffic sometimes gets so overwhelming that it...The traffic sometimes gets so overwhelming that it makes one wonder what is it that makes us want to go through it (literally and figuratively)! But then again, sometimes the destination (and what awaits us there) really makes everything worth the wait :) Loved your thoughts there though, Shashi.. poised and deliberate, they provoke the reader to think!<br /><br />The haiku set was simply fantastic, my friend... soft, intense and sensuous! A certain delight to the senses!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-45559529828776752352011-01-27T04:27:41.056+05:302011-01-27T04:27:41.056+05:30Shashi, I enjoyed your haiku very much, in particu...Shashi, I enjoyed your haiku very much, in particular "Flowers of Love..." & "Her finger nails..." Your shorter poems act as nice prelude to "Traffic Lights" which presents wise words and subtlety within those shadows of thought. There is great emotion and poetic command of language in that piece. Excellent poetry.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-6162451270499578342011-01-27T00:03:21.892+05:302011-01-27T00:03:21.892+05:30Fine haiku, and your longer poem even more thought...Fine haiku, and your longer poem even more thought-provoking and well written. The final image of walking away from the vehicle locked in traffic is very strong. As always, beautiful and insightful writing.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-35704908956415484972011-01-26T21:27:35.956+05:302011-01-26T21:27:35.956+05:30Passionate and sensual creations for us my friend,...Passionate and sensual creations for us my friend, with deep images to draw us along - your skill with description is, as ever, entrancing. And try not to get buried in that traffic...sometimes a little detour can make life all the more thrilling.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-13792544612971452232011-01-26T19:25:07.421+05:302011-01-26T19:25:07.421+05:30Lovely senryu set there my friend, you weave dream...Lovely senryu set there my friend, you weave dreams in haiku xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-80270415704913294072011-01-26T19:14:54.039+05:302011-01-26T19:14:54.039+05:30Brilliant poetry...
Loved the pictures :)Brilliant poetry...<br />Loved the pictures :)eyeographyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05508519847517495863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-87706318961997494702011-01-26T13:23:31.240+05:302011-01-26T13:23:31.240+05:30these are beautiful, Shashi-- I especially loved t...these are beautiful, Shashi-- I especially loved this one: In her silence<br />My lips find a whisper<br />Burning on her lips-- great job! xxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-20183135682841781312011-01-26T10:09:50.355+05:302011-01-26T10:09:50.355+05:30awesome photo's!
love this
'My lips find...awesome photo's!<br /><br />love this <br />'My lips find a whisper<br />Burning on her lips'<br />very nice<br /><br />your haiku is always a pleasure to read<br /><br />Traffic Lights<br />wow<br />very deep<br /><br />This especially<br />'Shackles of life lived<br />That coiled me up, in serpent like senses<br />Ready to strike<br />At any movement<br />At any stillness, that comes out alive<br />From the shadows of mind'<br /><br />loved all of it<br />thank youHopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-21558286339893220712011-01-26T10:05:23.357+05:302011-01-26T10:05:23.357+05:30very lovely pieces!very lovely pieces!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526666908406849762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-41435382674669706542011-01-26T10:00:12.913+05:302011-01-26T10:00:12.913+05:30I enjoyed each of them.. really nice writes Shashi...I enjoyed each of them.. really nice writes Shashi..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847065118004871994.post-11775749612488592632011-01-26T09:50:41.628+05:302011-01-26T09:50:41.628+05:30oh some rather sensual haiku...fingernail tattoos....oh some rather sensual haiku...fingernail tattoos...smiles. and yeah just walk away from the car the traffic is not worth it...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com