I love to write Haiku and enjoy them very much. As per the rules, it has to be confined to 5/7/5 syllables and within three lines, though I usually don’t adhere to these rules much. But as the topic for this week’s Potluck was Rules, I have limited my self to this particular rule and posted Haiku below that conform to this rule. To know more about Haiku form, have a look at the write up I have done as a guest writer at one of online community of poets, Click here…
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Hope you will all enjoy this little effort.
Didn't die; Just changed into
'Being' the tree, it was
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Depth of forest is
Not known by the trees, its breeze
That walks the long path
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Bodhi tree wants to
Live in Buddha moment; Plants
Time, in depths of 'now"
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Dawn tiptoes softly
Into her dreams; kiss her soft lips
Into her dreams; kiss her soft lips
With golden sun rays
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In the fire of lust
My senses stoke their desires
Refueling passion
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My desires; her needs
Makes daydreams of her soft lips
Touching mine; so real
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Pour passion through lips
Into my heart; let your love fill
My soul; complete me
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You wanted me to
Be empty, empty of you
Love; I broke my heart
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ॐ नमः शिवाय
its great but somehow i feel all these haikus should stand alone- as different postings.. anyway, its just an opinion from a novice.. do not take heed haha! here's mine for this potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/08/04/here-for-you/
ReplyDeleteyour nature Haikus are always fascinating..
ReplyDeleteFabulous entry.
Thanks for sharing...
A++
lovely...
ReplyDeleteAmazing haiku! It's so poetical and romantic... :)
ReplyDeleteDo you think in haiku...it flow so effortlessly.
ReplyDeletehttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2011/01/24/boundaries-jingles-poetry-potluck/
"plants time in the depths of now" - you know this has to be my favorite line here! :) all of your haiku are beautifully expressed.
ReplyDeleteYou are a master of the form, poet...and have more than done it justice with these beautiful and inspiring writes!
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