Dark clouds have rained and gone
You smile, in burst of rainbow, across sky
In deluge of pain, I smile too
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Love stands
Like the lotus in the pond
Like the lotus in the pond
Unattached, Alone, Deflowered
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SWAN SONG
(–noun the last act or manifestation
of someone or something;
farewell appearance)
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Lotus pond
Waits
Silently
Lotus flowers too
Pink petals -hesitatingly
Unfurl, heron silently stare
Life unfolding,
In the morning mist
Boddhi tree floated, a message
Of life,
In the falling leaf
On the temple floor
Breeze stood still
Music of Flute stopped playing
In the bamboo grove
Swan has started singing its song
Life, lives in little steps of love
But love bleeds life
In little steps, too
Falling, leaving and dying
Swan is singing
Its swan song
Time does not know,
It has come
Deep in the temple
Buddha Smiles
Nothing is forever
Forever is nothing
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ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Submitted for One Shot Wednesday WK 18
Love your swang song and the beautiful pictures.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful pictures...
ReplyDeleteAnd so well written... :)
lovely verse...you set the scene and then leave us with the riddle there at the end to think on...
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful....delicate, like good tanka!
ReplyDeleteA very satisfying poem....philosophically and in poetry!
Lady Nyo
Beautiful words.Time does not know,
ReplyDeleteIt has come - like that.
Your swan song is a beauty, with some lovely shots to boot. Serenity in the images, both in the poem and in the pictures themselves; thoughtful and well-written. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThere is a sadness here, a sadness of things ending, changing, becoming less. Well done.
ReplyDeleteDear KB, Sumit and SuziCate
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation and thoughts on my verse.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Dear Brian
ReplyDeleteThanks for your nice comment. The end is the riddle of life, I guess which many of us have still not worked out yet.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Dear Lady Nyo
ReplyDeleteI have enjoyed Tanka and Haiku's so much that I think they reflect their impression on me through my poetry.. thanks for your beautiful comment.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Thanks Cianphelan, for liking those images as well as the verse.
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Yes, Glynn, there is sadness there, not knowing where one is going, and why?
ReplyDeleteI am happy that you liked it.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Love this - especially the final stanza:
ReplyDeleteDeep in the temple
Buddha Smiles
Nothing is forever
Forever is nothing
So true
"Nothing is forever
ReplyDeleteForever is nothing"
That's why I'm a big fan of Buddha's!
Nice One Shot, Shashi!
I am honored to share creative space with you...wonderful poetry...always
ReplyDeletewhat a lovely swan song...my fav line...Life, lives in little steps of love
ReplyDeleteBut love bleeds life
In little steps, too...beautiful
I agree with Claudia! I also liked the last stanza. The images are striking and compliment this so well.
ReplyDeleteNice! I love the last two lines:
ReplyDelete"Nothing is forever
Forever is nothing:
Such beautiful imagery in your words and so profound. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThis whole poem rings very philosophical to me.
ReplyDeleteTime does not know,
It has come
-- time really doesn't know anything. It is us who anticipate its coming.
Beautiful poetry, pictures--meditations, really.
ReplyDeleteVictoria
hi shashi...the images and words were such a great combination...the sadness was very heartfelt...as patti mentioned " nothing is forever, forever is nothing"...cheers pete
ReplyDeleteI like your use of "deflowered" and its multiple meanings.
ReplyDeleteThanks Timoteo, I am happy that you noticed "Deflowered" there. Thanks for liking the verse...
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Thanks Pete for liking the image and seeing the sadness of it all...
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Om Namah Shivaya
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Thanks for liking this one and I appreciate your visit to my blog, hope to see you all again..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Dear Belinda
ReplyDeleteYes time really does not know ... as its neutral, no feelings, no emotions just eternal motion, unstopped, uncared.... just like water, as you say, its we who color it with our senses..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Dear Annie
ReplyDeleteI am honored too, with your visit to my blog and appreciation. I have liked your verse too and I value your words greatly...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Lovely verse. Melancholy and thought provoking. This was my favorite part:
ReplyDeleteLife, lives in little steps of love
But love bleeds life
In little steps, too
Falling, leaving and dying
Thanks for your nice comment at Life is Good.
Dear Tina
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment and appreciation. I am happy that you liked it...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Absolutely beautiful.
ReplyDeleteBoddhi tree floated, a message
Of life,
In the falling leaf
On the temple floor
I loved this... you paint such wonderful pictures with words.
Wysteria
Thanks Wysteria
ReplyDeleteI value your comments so much. Thanks for visiting and look forward to your visit again.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
This was exquisite
ReplyDelete"deep in the temple..."
not just in the temple
weight to every word
which stirred deep within me
wonderful images
...restraint made into art
"Life, lives in little steps of love
ReplyDeleteBut love bleeds life
In little steps, too"
I liked these lines especially, how the two, love and life, are so intertwined, they bleed each other. So true--love and life--they are one. And the swan's song becomes a beautiful celebration of the One who first loved us and gave us life...and will sustain us forever after we leave this earth.
You are a beautiful writer! Blessings to you. :)
i'm enjoying reading your blog, so rich in thoughts, beauty and sound.
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Dear Suz
ReplyDeleteMany of the times, writers like us, have special affinity to some thoughts in any of the works and I am glad that you picked one of them so beautifully close to my own thoughts about the word "Deep". I am grateful to you for visiting and liking this one and hope you will again. I value your comments and look forward to it...
thanks.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Dear Melissa
ReplyDeleteYou hit the nail on the head. Your take on this verse is so beautiful, that I was wondering whether you could have done a better job on this, than me. I think, you would have.
I am grateful for your blessings and hopefully, in coming day learn to write more beautifully as I am just a learner... and I learn a lot from interacting with talent like yours on the various blogs. Thanks for your blessings again and look forward to your visit again as I value your words so much...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Beautiful - the images painted by the words mingle with the images themselves. I am not sure what I can add that others have not previously stated... just beautiful.
ReplyDeletebeautiful collection it seems of Haikus Shashi,as the last part is central to the CORE as this is the Soul which all emanates from the center which is basically nothing but allowance for things to be possible in and manifested from..a known subjective reality from teh Divine..enjoy as well(+)
ReplyDeleteDom*:)
This is beautiful Shashi, and a bit sad too. You create such poignant images with you words. It is true that nothing here is forever, but there is a forever.
ReplyDeleteDear Exception
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your visit and wonderful comments. You have said it very nicely. Thanks for your visit and look forward to see you again...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Dear Dom
ReplyDeleteYes you got it right, its a collection of some haiku's and yes Buddha is the perfect being which resides among and within each of us. Its the core that sustains us and take us further on our path.
Thanks for your wonderful comment and I look forward to your visit again..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Dear Linda
ReplyDeleteThank you for your wonderful comment. Yes, its kind of sad too as it is about life, about to change... I am happy that you liked those images... they mean a lot to me too... Look forward to your visit again...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Happy, well written.
ReplyDeleteThanks Steve, I am happy that you are happy and look forward to your visit again...
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Beautiful comparison of love to a lotus flower. Your writing is so clean and well done.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words and images. Those last lines will be with me for quit awhile. :)
ReplyDeleteNice interview on One Shot. :) I know you a little better now.