Om Namah Shivaya

Om Namah Shivaya

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Jan 25, 2011

WHISPERS: Deep Forest, Sun rise and senses...

I love to write Haiku and enjoy them very much. As per the rules, it has to be confined to 5/7/5 syllables and within three lines, though I usually don’t adhere to these rules much. But as the topic for this week’s Potluck was Rules, I have limited my self to this particular rule and posted Haiku below that conform to this rule. To know more about Haiku form, have a look at the write up I have done as a guest writer at one of online community of poets, Click here…
Hope you will all enjoy this little effort.

 Seed, in giving birth
Didn't die; Just changed into
'Being' the tree, it was

Depth of forest is
Not known by the trees, its breeze
That walks the long path

Bodhi tree wants to
Live in Buddha moment; Plants
Time, in depths of 'now"

Dawn tiptoes softly
Into her dreams; kiss her soft lips
With golden sun rays

In the fire of lust
My senses stoke their desires
Refueling passion

My desires; her needs
Makes daydreams of her soft lips
Touching mine; so real

Pour passion through lips
Into my heart; let your love fill
My soul; complete me

You wanted me to
Be empty, empty of you
Love; I broke my heart
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya

 Submitted to POETRY POTLUCK - Rules, Regulations and Laws...


  1. its great but somehow i feel all these haikus should stand alone- as different postings.. anyway, its just an opinion from a novice.. do not take heed haha! here's mine for this potluck..

  2. your nature Haikus are always fascinating..

    Fabulous entry.
    Thanks for sharing...


  3. Greetings, Happy Tuesday! Blessings…

    Friendship Awards, Enjoy!
    Thanks for the support, You Rock!

  4. Amazing haiku! It's so poetical and romantic... :)

  5. Do you think in flow so effortlessly.

  6. "plants time in the depths of now" - you know this has to be my favorite line here! :) all of your haiku are beautifully expressed.

  7. You are a master of the form, poet...and have more than done it justice with these beautiful and inspiring writes!


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